UPSB v3
Armageddon / Show Off Your [Destructive] Combos!
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Date: Sat, Dec 27 2008 20:16:28
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Date: Sun, Dec 28 2008 01:26:19QUOTE (Sadistic @ Dec 27 2008, 08:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>Time for some stuff from me ~_~
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Date: Sun, Dec 28 2008 10:43:07
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Date: Sun, Dec 28 2008 10:46:36
http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=f_sxfjlvfb0
I posted it in a topic already but I'll post it here anyway. -
Date: Sun, Dec 28 2008 22:21:44
@ xxdef: very nice combo, the flush sonic bit was very smooth but perhaps it wasn't needed for this particular combo because it seemed to slow your pace to the point that it didn't really match the rest of the combo. I only saw one part where you added some filler combo, which is good enough, but just remember to think through all your linkages very clearly before each combo. Your baks are much better than mine, so I can't really complain about them, the only thing I would suggest is that you use less hand movement for them.
Remember, I'm not attempting to tear apart your combos or anything, I'm just offering some constructive criticism, to help improve your spinning in the future.
@Awesome:
The second combo had 2 too many hand transfers imo, but thats just personal preference. It seemed as though you didn't have to much to show after the hand transfers but you are certainly very good at 1p2h. Personally I prefer an aerial or bust or bak for an ending, but other enjoy multiple spins as a finisher.
The 3rd combo was very good, only thing I can suggest is perhaps work on the linkages a bit at the beginning to make them smooth and keep a slightly more consistent pace.
Those IAs are very nice, but you spoke of wanting to get style. I would suggest you either do some strange hand posture like S777 while your doing those are try to straightening and keep still your other 2 fingers similar to Rarka while doing them. takes a few minutes to achieve something you like, but other people will enjoy it when you use something stylish in a combo.
The combo at 1:00 was good, I liked the variety, but it didn't seem very smooth, you had one bad linkage in there from after the TA and you it didn't seem like you should have done more of an inverse warped sonic rather than a fingerpass after the shadow to keep the rythm up; oh, and don't catch in 12 face up imo ~_~
The combo at 1:11 had some very strange linkages, If you want to improve them, I would suggest you watch some slo-mos of MaKin or Saizen for some more appealing ones, If you don't have the soft-wear for this, I can help you get them pretty easily. I did enjoy the hand tosses at the beginning though =D. oooohhh....you choose very strange endings indeed....I guess thats just personal preference though.
The combo at 1:25 was my favorite to watch, you had some very nice tricks in there (I especially luv the IA~>air because you always see people doing rev IA~>air instead and it adds a much better appeal to it doing it normal rather than reverse), but you still needed to work on some smoothness, and probably should have cut the first part where you messed up out of the combo lolz.
BTW...because you use both your hands so much, you should totally learn to do a double bakfall....those look so godly.....
Remember, I'm not attempting to tear apart your combos or anything, I'm just offering some constructive criticism, to help improve your spinning in the future.
Good luck to the both of you
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Date: Sun, Dec 28 2008 22:50:43
Lack of finishers and werid linkages are in part due to that they were all free style and I suck at free styling XD, but I still need to work on those things.
Can you help me with that slomo stuff?
2nd combo, I wanted to spam transfers for it, since it was a night session I thought why not, I think the "infinity" transfer looks cool, but that might just be me.
the IAs that sounds like a good idea, I might try that
Iam off to learn bakfall on my right, its not smooth on that hand yet.
Like I said it was FS most of it, so I didn't put anything into endings, but I will keep it in mind when I make combos
Thanks for giving so much advice ^^ -
Date: Sun, Dec 28 2008 23:03:13QUOTE (Awesome @ Dec 28 2008, 06:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>Can you help me with that slomo stuff?
Well first you will need to download winrar if you don't already have it. [go down to the bottom where it says "version 3.80" and select the english one]
and....The warez board I use is currently down, so you will need to wait on youtube downloader, unless you know of a free version one.
last you just need a video editing program that can edit. If you don't already have one, I can help you get vegas 9.0 (very good) after the warez board is back up.QUOTE (Awesome @ Dec 28 2008, 06:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>Thanks for giving so much advice ^^
Thank you ~_~...I luv being a critique even if I'm not a very good one. -
Date: Sun, Dec 28 2008 23:05:01
I just use down load helper, can WMM slow down videos? Actually I have a link with vegas, Iam not sure if its 9.0 though...
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Date: Sun, Dec 28 2008 23:17:21
I don't think ive used WMM, but it probably can.
first videos to watch would be:
[Ayatori], [Saizen], [RYO], [MaKin] Because they have some of the smoothest linkages I have seen. But be cautious in trying some of the stuff that MaKin and Ayatori do, because it can be really difficult to get smooth a lot of the time. You don't need to slow down the whole videos, but watching a few of the combos from each should be good. -
Date: Mon, Dec 29 2008 10:06:01QUOTE (Sadistic @ Dec 29 2008, 05:01 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
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Date: Fri, Jan 2 2009 04:49:06
Was trying to film for MaKiZaR 3rd
Pretty fail so I rejected it. -
Date: Fri, Jan 2 2009 04:55:50
You are very good with light pens ~_~
Ya I wanted to be in MaKiZar 3rd as well...I should get filming soon -
Date: Fri, Jan 2 2009 05:01:03
definition I think you should slow your spinning down a wee bit. Some parts are way to fast and lose some of their appeal
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Date: Fri, Jan 2 2009 05:04:07QUOTE (Awesome @ Jan 1 2009, 09:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>definition I think you should slow your spinning down a wee bit. Some parts are way to fast and lose some of their appeal
I never thought I spun fast....but I don't know...I don't like going slow...
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Date: Fri, Jan 2 2009 20:42:21QUOTE (RagnarokメAM @ Jan 1 2009, 09:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>ye ur ext ta and infinity were really slow and other things were quicker tone to one speed unless ur going to do a speed change style
the infinity was meant to be slow..but I understand it looked weird with fast tricks
and the slow ext ta was definitely a mistake..if i went faster with it i would have dropped. -
Date: Wed, Jan 14 2009 04:09:09QUOTE (Sadistic @ Jan 12 2009, 10:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
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Date: Wed, Jan 14 2009 21:44:28
I HATE THE ZOOMING IN
The actual combo was good for a FS, -
Date: Wed, Jan 14 2009 23:43:31QUOTE (XYZakiメAM @ Jan 11 2009, 02:07 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
1st clip is pure BS spam.
2nd clip looks kinda cool.
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Date: Thu, Jan 15 2009 00:41:13
it might be BS spam but its still bet than my regular spam lolz xD
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Date: Thu, Jan 15 2009 03:24:30
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Date: Mon, Apr 13 2009 05:29:38
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Date: Wed, Apr 15 2009 10:56:45
@XYZakiメAM:ur good spinning with light pen...
new cam -
Date: Wed, Apr 15 2009 20:18:50
I like the black and white MaKiN KT and i love your FL TA and FL Tornados!