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not very good

  1. l33tPi
    Date: Tue, Feb 3 2009 06:09:42

    not very good dry.gif



    criticism?

  2. octan3
    Date: Tue, Feb 3 2009 06:13:43

    dont make a solo so soon... camera angle horrible...
    other then that, really nice spinning!

  3. tomohiro
    Date: Tue, Feb 3 2009 07:19:32

    a bit repetitive but whatever you made the video for criticism purposes sleep(1).gif i would really recommend u to
    - plan out a combo
    - find a better background to spin on- for example a desk tongue.gif it was really distracting when i saw your room cause it is so messy i pay more attention to that dunno.gif
    - you got off the camera a little when you did some sort of aerials or w/e so make your camera angle farther wink.gif
    not related but WTF HAPPENED TO YOUR LEFT ARM- i noticed for the first half of the clip your left arm was fine and then the last 2 clip or something u had like a cast running on your arm -___- silly you

  4. Kari-Chan
    Date: Tue, Feb 3 2009 10:14:35

    Lets see....

    1. As octan3 said... don't make a solo too soon... you should just call it something else instead...
    2. You spam TF Charge rev and Infinities too much
    3. The area where you spin is a bit too far off the screen... try to center it a bit more
    4. Your room is messier than my messiest.... But i reckon the camera view where you were sitting was good
    5. Keep spinning^^

  5. Loanshark
    Date: Tue, Feb 3 2009 10:33:46

    1. Your combos were too repetitive. Sonic Rise > some Infinity variation > Aerial was all used un almost every single combo.
    2. Camera angles were really bad. Spin over a desk, a table, or ever a chair.
    3. Your hand keeps getting off-camera. Center the camera more or try to spin within the shot.
    4. Messiest room I have ever seen, ever. Clean it.

  6. Glamouraz
    Date: Tue, Feb 3 2009 13:21:00

    Well, if it makes you feel better, my room's messier ohmy.gif XD...

    And a Mythbuster's shirt! aw.. i want that..

    Keep spinning! icon_2p2h.gif

  7. Kari
    Date: Tue, Feb 3 2009 19:45:02

    You need to clean your room mister!

  8. NightShad3
    Date: Wed, Feb 4 2009 03:14:10

    Needs some more diversity (ahem, actually a lot...), and needs many more fingerless tricks, if any. I can't do many fl tricks (like bakfall and fl ta/rev, mfl cartiod, etc.), but it adds more to the performance. "make it flow," more passes/reduce sonics (they're simple tricks, but fixing the number makes smoother combos) btw, too soon for the solo... nice job though.

  9. arthurrhodes
    Date: Wed, Feb 4 2009 03:24:07

    do you sleep on the bottom or top bunk? jk. ur ok. keep spinning

  10. テoh!
    Date: Wed, Feb 4 2009 03:28:05

    i agree with most everyone, but what bothered me most was every combo you ended with some arial, and your hand kept going out of frame when you were doing something like a palmspin. my favorite combo was the one with the birds-eye view, you can actually see averything

  11. Wind
    Date: Wed, Feb 4 2009 03:30:02

    get an editor and be more creative with your combos

  12. l33tPi
    Date: Wed, Feb 4 2009 03:32:18

    this was a practice thing... lol

  13. AwonW
    Date: Wed, Feb 4 2009 03:55:57

    QUOTE (l33tPi @ Feb 3 2009, 07:32 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    this was a practice thing... lol

    Well good job naming it as a "solo" and throwing everyone off..