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Research Department Feedback / Hand Care Article (preview)

  1. sketching
    Date: Sat, Jun 16 2007 07:54:29

    Original:
    http://z15.invisionfree.com/UCPSB/index.php?showtopic=6671

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    Feedback and constructive criticism is appreciated. Destructive criticism is not. Thanks.
    Some things to consider when rating:

    > Legibility (Can you read the article easily without strain on the eyes?)
    > Readability (Were you able to understand concepts easily on the first read-through? How is the clarity of the wording? etc.)
    > Layout/Appearance (How is the placement of diagrams & text? How is the spacing, footnotes, etc.?)
    > First impression (How did the article look at a first glance, before you even read it?)

    Note: This is only a preview. It's a rough draft only but potentially close to a final draft depending on feedback.

  2. Tialys
    Date: Fri, Feb 1 2008 22:09:26

    Sorry for the late update, but I had spent 10+ cumulative hours on this article when my hard drive suddenly corrupted and I hadn't made a back-up. I don't feel like re-typing the 15 pages I had, so I have unfortunately decided to scrap this project. I may write some smaller articles in the future.

    - Tialys