UPSB v3
Heroes of Tomorrow / tomohiro
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Date: Thu, Mar 5 2009 02:04:42
O HAI GUYS
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Date: Thu, Mar 5 2009 02:09:31
Hey tomo, glad to have you with us
err..if you haven't noticed already with all the other member threads, you can use this thread to post up vids of yourself and we'll critique it and you can ask for other forms of advice within your thread as well
but i'm really gladd you're with us, yayy ^^ -
Date: Thu, Mar 5 2009 02:11:08
D: WHERE BE COMBO TO CRITICIZE? BISH!!!! jk ^^
*handshakes* -
Date: Thu, Mar 5 2009 02:47:00
WATS GUD MY HOMIEEE
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Date: Thu, Mar 5 2009 02:59:12
i like the smoothness and ending
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Date: Thu, Mar 5 2009 06:27:48
Welcome to the team. :]
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Date: Fri, Mar 27 2009 02:22:27
using it as a practice for a collab that's going to come up but this is going for chaos 1st
haven't been spinning lately since i've been busy but... comment plz
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Date: Fri, Mar 27 2009 02:25:23
more direction changes/palm turns
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Date: Sun, Apr 12 2009 07:48:22
well i need to start improving right now so..
first combo was pretty bad cause i was holding the camera.
second one was off cam and not smooth so :[
bummer for that
so i need some constructive criticism
u know the typical video recommendation or like what tricks i should include more(cept shadows i noticed i have like none in there)
and i need some charlie comments lol -
Date: Sun, Apr 12 2009 19:00:31
You've gotten smoother, just a bit. Combos were good, just needs variation. Your spinning is similar to my lefthand. Very constrained. Because it is indeed limited. It lacks variation and linkage, and you're only used to using similar linkages over and over. This is due to a low repertoire of tricks and linkages. I suggest expanding upon your usual around hybrids. Maybe pick up some devils sonic and angels sonic hybrids and such. Go japanese and learn some thumb tricks: thumbcharges, inv tipped sonics, tipped sonics (but don't do tipped sonic falls unless you do them key3 style. normal tipped sonic falls are hideous), and TA variations.
Also needs more direction changes although I see that you're spinning palm-down more often. That's good. I suggest learning your around reverses and using charge harmonics and such to change direction. A well-placed baktorev is nice too. The only baks I see from you are bakfalls or bak > midbak. Expand on your backarounds. Ex: twisted sonic > neobak 12-12 or 12-34 (or bak 12-12). You don't need to learn a lot of hard tricks to increase your trick arsenal. Small ones can help a lot. Learning new linkages always helps too.
Don't limit yourself. Don't be afraid of letting go, tomo!
But I like your style, it's similar to saizen's current style. -
Date: Tue, May 5 2009 22:30:38
for the tourney -
Date: Tue, May 5 2009 22:32:53
woot, we got this. good job guys. you both have gotten much better
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Date: Tue, May 19 2009 04:36:36
another fun combo by me on my free time -
Date: Tue, May 19 2009 04:59:55
Still quite typical korean and your style still feels contained.
I suggest watching more ps vids and branching out. Don't be afraid to try new things.