UPSB v3
Heroes of Tomorrow / Jamie Enns
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Date: Tue, Jun 9 2009 03:58:38
I know I NEED a new angle/cam, and i'm working on it. but with exams... i need to appear as if i'm studying and it's going to take awhile to rig up a permanent camera angle.
I was going to wait to make this thread, but i'll start now because of the HoT HW assignment.
Combo for a Collab that is currently in the "to-be-released" phase, filmed on the 27th of may:
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?yzoyyjt1eot
it's probably my latest "combo" besides my crappy copies and my silly free styles.
Breakdown:
rev inv sonic 23-24 > sonic 24-13 > rev inv tw sonic 13-34 > rev ring around ~> spider spin rev .5 34-12 > neo bak 12-123 ~> neo mid bak to air > mid back spin .5 > mid bak 123-12 > invs pass (?) 12-P > rev neo sonic P-34 > rev charge 34 > pass 34-23 > tw sonic 23-12 > Index pinky bak 12-34 > scissor spin 34-T1 > rev thumb around 1.5 T1-23 > rev inv tw sonic 23-34 > ring around rev 34-34 > pinky bak
... breakdown could be cleaned up...
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Date: Tue, Jun 9 2009 04:02:06
its spelled enns, not enns, your name xD
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Date: Tue, Jun 9 2009 04:07:14
thanks
it's fixed now -
Date: Tue, Jun 9 2009 04:16:48
and very good, i liked the midbak riser into midbak
and uber smooth, puts raimo to shame xDD -
Date: Tue, Jun 9 2009 04:20:38
I cant play .mov. :\
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Date: Tue, Jun 9 2009 04:24:01
download vlc player, plays any format, or any that i tested
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Date: Tue, Jun 9 2009 23:17:58
still having problems Charlie?
and what if i found away of keeping my cam like this, and i got rid of the odd coloring:
http://www.mediafire.com/?jqm2emymn1d
better? ish? -
Date: Tue, Jun 9 2009 23:33:06
it's better, but can you try and give it a bit of a more looking downward angle?
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Date: Wed, Jun 10 2009 00:05:39
I dled some code packs and such, I'm okay. I think a higher angle would be nice and if you could do away with the bubbles, that'd be nice too.
Nice spinning though, Jamie. Very smooth. -
Date: Wed, Jun 10 2009 00:25:34
but i like the bubbles D:
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Date: Tue, Jun 23 2009 05:40:01
weak sauce spam, but pen test -
Date: Wed, Mar 3 2010 22:04:33
/revive
any suggestions on a battle against Mystic? -
Date: Thu, Mar 4 2010 01:19:43
I like your linkage and trick list but you lack control and overall smoothness sometimes.
Mystic has good difficulty and linkage and manages it with great control and smoothness. Good luck! I'd go for a new angle too. I'm sure some of the judges felt that it was detrimental towards full enjoyment of your spinning as it's hard to see certain tricks. -
Date: Thu, Mar 4 2010 01:50:35QUOTE (Look Into the Sun @ Mar 3 2010, 05:19 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>I like your linkage and trick list but you lack control and overall smoothness sometimes.
Mystic has good difficulty and linkage and manages it with great control and smoothness. Good luck! I'd go for a new angle too. I'm sure some of the judges felt that it was detrimental towards full enjoyment of your spinning as it's hard to see certain tricks.
Yeah I agree, maybe go for variety? I think Mystic is kinda lacking there. -
Date: Thu, Mar 4 2010 02:16:10
and be sure to put some creative elements in there to wow the judges.... mystic's spinning is nice, but it's stuff we've all pretty much seen before
i think if you throw something reallyyy different in there, that'll give you the advantage of mystic -
Date: Thu, Mar 4 2010 02:19:15
Yeah, his combos are all the same >.>
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Date: Thu, Mar 4 2010 03:47:09
http://www.mediafire.com/?wdyzzly5nyu
some mini combos i filmed quickly, if any stand out to you, i'll smoothen them out and use it/them in the battle combo
working on a new angle too ^^ (can some one teach me to use a Sony HDR-HC7, HD but frame rate is not good good for penspinning
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and: difficult creative > stereotypical power?
okokokok, keep the tips coming -
Date: Thu, Mar 4 2010 05:26:28
First trick was nice but doesn't seem applicable. I enjoyed the midbaks but they were sloppy. The bust into half-tap mini-combo is a good mini-combo but stylistically could be improved on. Take advantage of a quick moving bust and utilize the half-taps for slow-downs and suspense-building to improve upon the look of the mini-combo.
And... Clean it up, jamie! Narrow down on excess hand movement and keep it smooth. No stutters. I want a good tempo and for it to seem effortless and aesthetic.
I enjoyed the arounds and inv shadows in this combo: http://www.youtube.com/user/jdtheac#p/u/2/pInuJxjIrJc
Lovely baks, would be great if you could incorporate this into your combo: http://www.youtube.com/user/jdtheac#p/u/3/nTQtup6MHRE
Makoto midbak risers! Use it. You're good at them and they have great appeal: http://www.youtube.com/user/jdtheac#p/u/10/Wg2vf3k5peI
Also enjoyed the linkage in the raimo copy: http://www.youtube.com/user/jdtheac#p/u/14/kJOgbomcEms
Great opener: http://www.youtube.com/user/jdtheac#p/u/17/IZchnGQY7_U
Smoother than usual combo I'd like to see more of, aside from 00:10 and the finisher: http://www.youtube.com/user/jdtheac#p/u/1/BiWVQccZXXE -
Date: Fri, Mar 12 2010 18:47:05
http://www.mediafire.com/?zzk24x0mnzk
tis it enough?
i had sooo much trouble filming this, tooo hard
but i did it, and i tried to stay in control (even though the ring baks are sketch)
should i refilm? plan something new?
help/thanks! -
Date: Sat, Mar 13 2010 00:54:09
Looks great! The control is much better, makes your spinning look much nicer. Some really good linkage too. It should do, Jamie. No new angle? :[
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Date: Sat, Mar 13 2010 01:27:23
Crazy stuff Jamie, loved the aerial and the ending was sick. And i dont know why people want you to change your angle, i think the one you have right now suits you and i like it.
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Date: Sat, Mar 13 2010 02:21:28QUOTE (Baaron @ Mar 12 2010, 05:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>Crazy stuff Jamie, loved the aerial and the ending was sick. And i dont know why people want you to change your angle, i think the one you have right now suits you and i like it.
The unorthodox angle might work but at the same time, it obscures tricks and jamie's style. It was very refreshing to see jamie with new angles and showed a different side to his spinning which I liked and did prefer.
Beauty is subjective, of course. -
Date: Sat, Mar 13 2010 03:01:42
good enough to beat this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dd6dcezShdA T-T
fml -
Date: Sat, Mar 13 2010 04:34:06
Your combo was way better than his imo. A lot more variety, better smoothness and execution. Even your difficulty was pretty comparable to his.
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Date: Thu, Apr 22 2010 23:47:35
http://www.mediafire.com/?mdhwiowwzie
keep filming, or no?
i want to stop spinning heavy pens for a bit, gotta get over this tournement -
Date: Thu, Apr 22 2010 23:52:02
probably not the smoothest compared to mystic but the linkages, variety and difficulty are amazing
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Date: Thu, Apr 22 2010 23:55:24
true that, i'm not smooth when ever i plan combos... but i don't know if i could refilm better
also, is the finisher ok? tis not what i planned, but i happend!
thanks though :3 -
Date: Fri, Apr 23 2010 00:20:34
Your spinning lacks the confidence that mystic has. It doesn't feel sure of itself but more experimental. In this case, it has that feeling because the linkages are indeed unique; the experimental feeling is the due to the nature of your experimentation in linkages rather than use of mini-combos honed with repetition and practice. While smoothness is always nice, in this case, I appreciate the thoughtful linkages and would (probably) give you the win unless mystic pulls something unexpected.
Finishers alright but probably the less smooth portion of your combo (there's a change in the pace of your combo after the IPBA Rev) which lessens the impact of your overall combo. -
Date: Sat, Apr 24 2010 04:05:03
thanks for the feed back, but atm, i don't think i have time to film again D:
might have to stick with it because my refilming last night = fail