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Single Member Videos / doggy-dog 1 year solo video
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Date: Tue, Feb 9 2010 05:27:39
Hi! here is my vid:
Editing isn't very good))
PS: Subscribe please!
PPS: 2:28 - vicgotgame's mini combo 4 ©
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Date: Tue, Feb 9 2010 05:40:32
I like some of your stuff like the cont middle arounds and your style of bust <3
Things I don't like:
You cutting off the cam before a bail at the end of a combo. Even if it wasn't a bail, don't cut the combo short.
You seem to have a lot of variety, now use it in every combo! A lot of your combos got boring due to the little variation or a mini-combo that looked familiar.
Include more arounds in your combos - seriously.
Change your cammera angle to the other side of your desk. It'll be better.
After that, you should be great
PS, I see you're new to the forums Thanks button is down, left |
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