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Single Member Videos / My first youtube/pen spinning video!
I spam alot ._.
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Date: Sun, Mar 7 2010 20:17:36
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ss_tIw1lJ8
Two things for you:
1. Don't hate on my music
2. Don't hate on my spammy noobiness
Thank you! Comments? Help me improve? Don't be too harsh?
Note: The last clip is not me. It's my friend ._. -
Date: Sun, Mar 7 2010 21:51:14
I am not fond of the angle, try lowering it a bit.
I would like to see more full length combos, most of them were really short.
I liked the swivel counter thing or whatever it is at 1:10ish, just try to reduce the pause in it as much as possible, ideally it wouldn't be noticeable at all, if you can do that and put it in a combo it would be sexy.
Keep on practicing, eventually you will just kinda develop a flow, no need to force it, it just comes with lots of spinning time.
Hopefully that doesn't sound too harsh, I think you have potential you just need to spend countless hours spinning -
Date: Wed, Mar 10 2010 05:37:24QUOTE (Awesome @ Mar 7 2010, 04:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>I am not fond of the angle, try lowering it a bit.
I would like to see more full length combos, most of them were really short.
I liked the swivel counter thing or whatever it is at 1:10ish, just try to reduce the pause in it as much as possible, ideally it wouldn't be noticeable at all, if you can do that and put it in a combo it would be sexy.
Keep on practicing, eventually you will just kinda develop a flow, no need to force it, it just comes with lots of spinning time.
Hopefully that doesn't sound too harsh, I think you have potential you just need to spend countless hours spinning
i agree the combo's could have been longer but overall i like the video, the music wasnt to bad and you look very nice spinning your pen's