UPSB v3

Organzation XIII Base / Video Criticism

  1. Wind
    Date: Tue, Apr 20 2010 23:08:43

    Basically, O13's own. Show Off Your Combo thread

    Post your videos here and receive criticism.

    My PSL combo against IDOLA biggrin.gif
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1DSaJ34KID0

  2. blahblahting
    Date: Wed, Apr 21 2010 02:50:59

    seems like theres a lot of charge/pass/sonic stuff :/
    nice aerials though

    try using some more spins maybe? (inv shadows, palmspins etcetc)

    my combo vs wind will be here soon tongue.gif

  3. Storm*4
    Date: Wed, Apr 21 2010 21:19:29

    Include more trick-family-trees in your combos. xD Spins, shadows, etc. :3
    It was a great combo though. D:

  4. KTrinh93
    Date: Thu, Apr 22 2010 02:19:07

    http://www.mediafire.com/?zqtn23uyzty

    i know there are some pauses and stuff.. but anything else i could work on? my angle kinda ruined the smoothness of my attempted single directional combo.. dry.gif

  5. blahblahting
    Date: Thu, Apr 22 2010 02:52:07

    ktrinh: i liked how you did incorporate some spins into your combo. however, the transitions from palm up to palm down all seemed the same :/ try using stuff like ringaround > devils shadow 34-34 to create more variety in palm up/down transitions tongue.gif

    hope this helps wink.gif

    and yes, better angle and smoothness would help

  6. xSpin
    Date: Fri, Apr 23 2010 13:56:24

    QUOTE (xSpin @ Apr 23 2010, 06:54 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

    Spoiler:

    first combo is LOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGG. D<
    comments? :/
    video is better at 480p >>;

  7. blahblahting
    Date: Fri, Apr 23 2010 22:47:55

    bits of off camera-ness in the second fs. not bad though, i like how your spinning looks from that angle. my spinning looks like crap from an angle like that :/

    anyways heres my combo for the yogurt revolution tourney against wind. comments/suggestions plz?
    (i already know its somewhat sloppy and choppy)
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bTNJtgb2Uq4

  8. Wind
    Date: Sat, Apr 24 2010 02:55:27

    QUOTE (blahblahting @ Apr 23 2010, 06:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    bits of off camera-ness in the second fs. not bad though, i like how your spinning looks from that angle. my spinning looks like crap from an angle like that :/

    anyways heres my combo for the yogurt revolution tourney against wind. comments/suggestions plz?
    (i already know its somewhat sloppy and choppy)
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bTNJtgb2Uq4

    ITS SOOO CHOPPY AND SLOPPY

    anyways I finished mine a few minutes ago... it's so.......... horrible and last minute.

    is that your final video? ohmy.gif

    here's mine
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YSebrhwXCJc

  9. blahblahting
    Date: Sun, Apr 25 2010 00:45:14

    im pretty much copying my soyc stuff to here, but anyways:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EuzriV1o6Wo

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urScMlhCTNw

  10. KTrinh93
    Date: Sun, Apr 25 2010 00:47:53

    QUOTE (blahblahting @ Apr 24 2010, 08:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    im pretty much copying my soyc stuff to here, but anyways:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EuzriV1o6Wo

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urScMlhCTNw

    im gonna respond with terse answers since the combos were short anyways..

    vid 1: spin in frame.. if ur gonna be spinning like that that zoom out a bit wink.gif
    vid 2: interesting but i could tell you weren't that confident doing it.. btw was the stall before the fl ta intentional?

  11. blahblahting
    Date: Sun, Apr 25 2010 00:52:53

    vid 1: yeah i figured i should zoom out more now :/
    vid 2: no i wasnt confident >.< im trying to incorporate counters into my spinning, and the "stall" was supposed to be a counter fl ta rev that didnt exactly work out

    EDIT: i rly like the neobak to pinkyaround at the start of the 2nd vid though tongue.gif xD

  12. VendettaBF
    Date: Sun, Apr 25 2010 06:57:30

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQfXsBFvqhA

    ok angle?

  13. blahblahting
    Date: Sun, Apr 25 2010 21:48:57

    QUOTE (VendettaBF @ Apr 24 2010, 10:57 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQfXsBFvqhA

    ok angle?


    i really like that angle ohmy.gif great lighting, but get the lamp out of the way. i like the cardboard too, the fps seems much better w/o the white background

    i should try that angle tongue.gif

    EDIT: back to spinning an ungripped namae mod?

  14. KTrinh93
    Date: Sun, Apr 25 2010 22:11:30

    fps is good ohmy.gif i like the angle but like blahblah said make sure you try to get the lamp outta the way.. i still need to work on getting my perfect angle dry.gif i dont like mine D:

  15. VendettaBF
    Date: Sun, Apr 25 2010 23:07:44

    blah, it's actually the super pirat body, and there is alittle surprise in the namae caps.

  16. spinneraddiction
    Date: Thu, May 6 2010 19:51:33

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7uQLhCe71fg lots of power tricks =/ but comments?

  17. Storm*4
    Date: Thu, May 6 2010 20:24:55

  18. KTrinh93
    Date: Thu, May 6 2010 22:29:28

    @spinner love your busts wub.gif umm i dont particularly like the dongza "desk in the way to prop up my camera" thing =/ i find that generally unappealing considering for a few of your clips are covered up by the desk/laptop. Work on control of your power tricks.. they look a little sloppy. if possible try to get an actual webcam even though the quality of your laptop one is good..

    @storm youve gotten a LOT smoother than when we made our tag a while back.. the angle is good and so it the lighting except for the part in the upper right hand corner is a little bright but its pretty good.. the slight shadow is nice.. good control and framing wink.gif

  19. Storm*4
    Date: Fri, May 7 2010 10:42:56

    Thank you Trinh~
    I was sick that day so... Blah. (Which was yesterday, lol)

    Did you know extreme fatigue can actually cause complications? O_o
    I don't know how you do it Trinh. xD I envy you.

  20. blahblahting
    Date: Fri, May 7 2010 23:18:00

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_MFbl4vC5ZI

  21. KTrinh93
    Date: Sat, May 8 2010 02:04:49

    QUOTE (Storm*4 @ May 7 2010, 06:42 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    Thank you Trinh~
    I was sick that day so... Blah. (Which was yesterday, lol)

    Did you know extreme fatigue can actually cause complications? O_o
    I don't know how you do it Trinh. xD I envy you.

    are you referring to me get average 3-4 hours a night of sleep? wink.gif and the simple reason? im asian biggrin.gif

  22. blahblahting
    Date: Sat, May 8 2010 20:06:01

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kxoF8aXbBtY

    and comments on my previous post plz biggrin.gif

  23. ryamashiro
    Date: Wed, May 12 2010 02:32:40



    new style?
    and yes i kno im terrible tongue.gif

  24. blahblahting
    Date: Wed, May 12 2010 02:38:26

    well i like the style dunno.gif some direction changes were unnecessary though tongue.gif

  25. KTrinh93
    Date: Wed, May 12 2010 02:40:51

    QUOTE (blahblahting @ May 11 2010, 10:38 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    well i like the style dunno.gif some direction changes were unnecessary though tongue.gif

    ^ what he said ^ haha interesting style though happy.gif

  26. Wind
    Date: Wed, May 12 2010 02:55:33

    zoom out your camera

  27. spinneraddiction
    Date: Fri, May 14 2010 03:13:20

    my one year solo

  28. iColor
    Date: Fri, May 14 2010 03:18:43

  29. blahblahting
    Date: Fri, May 14 2010 04:47:09

    not bad icolor, but the pen seems ginormous 0_0

    and i think you need a better angle spinneraddiction :/

  30. Wind
    Date: Fri, May 14 2010 23:10:07

    Nah, taylor needs to put his camera at the highest quality >=(

  31. KTrinh93
    Date: Sat, May 15 2010 02:32:20

    QUOTE (spinneraddiction @ May 13 2010, 11:13 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    my one year solo

    is pretty good.. like wind said try to bump up the settings.. your spinning is great but it was slightly ruined by the fps and angle.. the combos at the table were filmed at a good angle but again fps and quality overall.. some obvious spinning mistakes but i still think you did fairly well.. i sorta notice youre like me in that you kinda spam certain linkages and mini combos throughout you videos/clips BUT for only a year youre about where i am right now o_O.. oh one more thing.. CONTROL.. i dont think i need to explain that one.. but again good job! happy.gif

  32. KTrinh93
    Date: Sat, May 15 2010 02:43:11

    double post dry.gif the video didnt finish exporting or uploading or processing when i posted the above comment.. so yeah


    i suck ._.

  33. spinneraddiction
    Date: Thu, May 20 2010 01:10:42


    got new camera biggrin.gif whacha think?

  34. blahblahting
    Date: Thu, May 20 2010 01:46:04

    lol um interesting combo finisher thing xD work on smoothness and youll be supah pro :3
    nice camera, but zoom out more wink.gif

  35. KTrinh93
    Date: Thu, May 20 2010 19:14:32

    QUOTE (blahblahting @ May 19 2010, 09:46 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    work on smoothness and youll be supah pro :3
    nice camera, but zoom out more wink.gif

    agreed smile.gif i think the angle would be perfect if you zoomed out.. and some more control would be nice.. as usual.. pretty good smile.gif though the 8x bust looks like 7x bc u cant see off cam at the end o_O

  36. xSpin
    Date: Fri, May 21 2010 13:14:15

    I think it was 7. Hahaha. But good quality/fps and what not. Just get a better angle. Hahah. And try working around with you fingers. It looks kinda weird when you do TF Charge> FLTA Rev. D:

  37. spinneraddiction
    Date: Sun, May 23 2010 01:25:16

    i think this is pretty smooth biggrin.gif except in two places it seems good to me

  38. iColor
    Date: Sun, May 23 2010 17:47:00

    Which is better?

    http://www.mediafire.com/?luyrgjczrzy

    or

    http://www.mediafire.com/?tlj5n0irkku

  39. Wind
    Date: Sun, May 23 2010 18:25:56

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0WhWA4uOi1g

    Not so good combo

  40. blahblahting
    Date: Mon, May 24 2010 04:14:48

    QUOTE (iColor @ May 23 2010, 09:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    Which is better?

    http://www.mediafire.com/?luyrgjczrzy

    or

    http://www.mediafire.com/?tlj5n0irkku


    combo 2 better

  41. iColor
    Date: Wed, May 26 2010 00:19:07

    http://www.mediafire.com/?myvnyxjinnh

  42. blahblahting
    Date: Wed, May 26 2010 01:55:22

    no comments on my last couple vids? D:

    and icolor you wanna upload to youtube? im lazy lol

  43. iColor
    Date: Wed, May 26 2010 02:07:34

    It's my JC 1st Combo but if it's not good enough, I'll send to Wind. xD

  44. Wind
    Date: Wed, May 26 2010 02:08:33

    QUOTE (iColor @ May 25 2010, 10:07 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    It's my JC 1st Combo but if it's not good enough, I'll send to Wind. xD

    You'll send to Wind 3rd? Are you sure? Might get filtered.

  45. iColor
    Date: Wed, May 26 2010 02:09:57

    Then I'll refilm and use 12ve creativity? biggrin.gif

  46. Eric
    Date: Fri, Jun 4 2010 22:33:43

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OFWmjqEBXt8

    my most recent spinning x)

  47. Wind
    Date: Fri, Jun 4 2010 22:50:14

    QUOTE (Eric @ Jun 4 2010, 06:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OFWmjqEBXt8

    my most recent spinning x)

    did you even post a combo for NH+O13 tag?

  48. xSpin
    Date: Fri, Jun 4 2010 23:02:18

  49. KTrinh93
    Date: Sat, Jun 5 2010 01:43:59


    its bad i know D:

  50. iColor
    Date: Sat, Jun 5 2010 03:04:28

    QUOTE (xSpin @ Jun 4 2010, 07:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

    Spoiler:


    How come I never noticed your left/right hand skill? D:

  51. xSpin
    Date: Sat, Jun 5 2010 03:14:55

    QUOTE (iColor @ Jun 4 2010, 08:04 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    How come I never noticed your left/right hand skill? D:

    it's a secret. ohmy.gif

  52. ryamashiro
    Date: Sat, Jun 5 2010 07:24:11

  53. Storm*4
    Date: Sat, Jun 5 2010 20:34:17

    Jebus, you're good. :T Really good in fact. (is that a SEVEN mod?)

    Other than a little bit off-screen, and the ending being a little awkward, that was awesome. smile.gif More smoothness couldn't hurt, but I don't expect any smoother from anyone at that level of spinning.

  54. blahblahting
    Date: Sat, Jun 5 2010 20:48:50

    QUOTE (ryamashiro @ Jun 4 2010, 11:24 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

    Spoiler:


    finsher was sexy :3

  55. ryamashiro
    Date: Sat, Jun 5 2010 22:13:38

    @Storm*4 yeah SEVEn mod
    :[[ im not good


    @blahblahting
    itlooks at bad from that angle tho tongue.gif

  56. iColor
    Date: Sun, Jun 6 2010 19:21:35

    http://www.mediafire.com/?f3c23xzk0d2

    Uh.. so I was invited to join JExp No.3 by Jamie Enns and I came up with this combo, but I'm not sure if it'll be good enough compared to Shadowserpant and other people. Lulz. Oh well, I still have a week left before videos are due.

  57. KTrinh93
    Date: Sun, Jun 6 2010 20:02:33

    QUOTE (iColor @ Jun 6 2010, 03:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    http://www.mediafire.com/?f3c23xzk0d2

    Uh.. so I was invited to join JExp No.3 by Jamie Enns and I came up with this combo, but I'm not sure if it'll be good enough compared to Shadowserpant and other people. Lulz. Oh well, I still have a week left before videos are due.

    ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. so smooth D:

  58. VendettaBF
    Date: Sat, Jun 12 2010 19:53:32



    got my bbuster yesterday

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UN6N_qNg020 new angle

  59. Eric
    Date: Sat, Jun 12 2010 20:05:16

    not sure if its just the angle, but try to let the pen go around your pinky before the "chopping" part, right now it looks like its rolling off the tip of your fingers 1234 after the initial TA.

  60. KTrinh93
    Date: Mon, Jun 14 2010 00:51:10

  61. Storm*4
    Date: Mon, Jun 14 2010 17:35:48

    A little too long, it felt like you dragged out the left hand part. Also, if you could change the angle to be like Awesome's when 1p2h'ing, that be better. :3
    Otherwise, you're getting good with your left hand. I envy you...

  62. KTrinh93
    Date: Mon, Jun 14 2010 17:38:37

    QUOTE (Storm*4 @ Jun 14 2010, 01:35 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    A little too long, it felt like you dragged out the left hand part. Also, if you could change the angle to be like Awesome's when 1p2h'ing, that be better. :3
    Otherwise, you're getting good with your left hand. I envy you...

    yeah i didnt expect my left hand spinning to be a majority of the vid facepalm.gif it took too long to get the pen where i needed it to be for the transfer D:

    and its too long for wind's 3rd facepalm.gif
    is that vid good enough for upsb 2nd? D:

  63. KTrinh93
    Date: Wed, Jun 16 2010 22:04:59

    double post dry.gif anyways some bad combos that i filmed D: besides the obviously screw ups what else can i do? D:

  64. blahblahting
    Date: Wed, Jun 16 2010 22:31:15

    QUOTE (KTrinh93 @ Jun 16 2010, 02:04 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    double post dry.gif anyways some bad combos that i filmed D: besides the obviously screw ups what else can i do? D:

    Spoiler:


    work on smoothness and control. the neobak riser seemed unnecessary b/c it had the same amount of rotations as a normal neobak, so you might has well have done a normal, non-aerial neobak.

  65. KTrinh93
    Date: Wed, Jun 16 2010 22:43:55

    QUOTE (blahblahting @ Jun 16 2010, 06:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    work on smoothness and control. the neobak riser seemed unnecessary b/c it had the same amount of rotations as a normal neobak, so you might has well have done a normal, non-aerial neobak.

    r u talking about the neobak riser tht i did in the first combo? yeah i just wanted to throw an aerial in there =/

  66. blahblahting
    Date: Wed, Jun 16 2010 23:40:52

    QUOTE (KTrinh93 @ Jun 16 2010, 03:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    r u talking about the neobak riser tht i did in the first combo? yeah i just wanted to throw an aerial in there =/


    mhmm. i'd say either throw in more rotations or do a neobak riser > backspin

  67. KTrinh93
    Date: Wed, Jun 16 2010 23:41:37

    QUOTE (blahblahting @ Jun 16 2010, 07:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    mhmm. i'd say either throw in more rotations or do a neobak riser > backspin

    yeah i was trying to do a backspin but i couldnt get it to well.. spin facepalm.gif

  68. spinneraddiction
    Date: Thu, Jun 17 2010 03:05:55

    good job kevin!

  69. VendettaBF
    Date: Thu, Jun 17 2010 03:40:57

    tip it on ur dick? like give tip (money) on ur dick?

  70. xSpin
    Date: Thu, Jun 17 2010 13:25:57

    TIP IT ON MAH DICK TIP IT TIP IT ON MAH DICK.