UPSB v3
Battlezone / PSL R3 Wind vs Shadow (Wind Auto-win)
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Date: Thu, May 13 2010 00:24:06
Wind
Shadow
No submission -
Date: Thu, May 13 2010 02:27:35
You should have just done a TA
But it was a really nice combo although I saw a lot of neosonic or neosonic variations. -
Date: Thu, May 13 2010 02:31:25
*do what i say, not what i do*
wind, get out of your comfort zone -
Date: Thu, May 13 2010 02:31:33QUOTE (Kirby @ May 12 2010, 10:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>You should have just done a TA
But it was a really nice combo although I saw a lot of neosonic or neosonic variations.
i only did like... 3...
the others you thought was neo sonics were actually very crappy index around aerialsQUOTE (hoiboy @ May 12 2010, 10:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>*do what i say, not what i do*
wind, get out of your comfort zone
uhh explain o.O -
Date: Thu, May 13 2010 16:55:52
does shadow forfeit only for this round?
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Date: Thu, May 13 2010 17:22:41
Yeah if he doesn't submit another week i'll replace him
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Date: Fri, May 14 2010 16:04:14
nice wind...
though the korean version of the song is so much better
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Date: Sat, May 15 2010 20:15:28
first, i wanna say that wind, you made a pretty good combo, it was smooth for the most part and i see improvement with your confidence i think
and so secondly... since shadow didn't submit a video, i don't have anything to compare this vid against, so i'll just comment on this vid (which i think sorta represents your usual general spinning also) to help you get past the next step of improvement =] (get ready, i'm about to tear this thing apart.. sorry ><)
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:09-:13 looked like a lotta spam.. and although you put aerials into there, they don't add another highlight to your combo as i wished they would because they it made that whole section look spammy
-- your aerials, all of them, need a bit more air
-- if you can't, try to change your angle so that the pen flies in the camera's direction when you do the aerial, it gives a bit of an illusion that the pen is going higher than it actually is
right now, when you do your aerials...
i imagine a little sound.. pu- pu- pu-... (imagine a little engine trying to start)
get me a POW POW POW
highlights were: pinkybak section and bakriser > thumbindex spin rev section
-- you need more of those things that stand out, cause aside from that, the rest of your combo was kinda boring =\
-- or if you can't, add more direction changes and tricks that just don't look the same going up and down your hand
add more 34 tricks
-- one thing that i think you need to do is expand your trick repertoire a bit and become comfortable with a lot more stuff
-- this goes into what hoiboy's saying i think; you're stuck spinning in your comfort zone which is like.. FS'ing, and doing whatever your hand naturally would do, and even the highlights that you would do that you might have to think more about before doing are things that we see from you a bunch already (like bakriser)
-- you don't seem so comfortable with 34 tricks though, so go out of your comfort zone and try more of those (PA, ipba rev, pinkybak 1.5s)
-- although this might not be possible right away, but don't do a hard trick in 34, and then go back into something comfortable using T12 to like.. regain control (that would be your ultimate goal for now i guess.. become comfortable enough on 34 to not rely on t12 to back you up and for you to run back to after a 34 highlight trick) -but again, that might not be happening anytime soon, but keep it in the back of your mind
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Like i said before, i liked this combo a lot from you, so don't be discouraged by all that -- it's constructive criticism =]
i really like all increased control you're showing, but those things are just some things to think about
Think about all those things up there as tough love
i wouldn't say it if i dind't care ^^'" -
Date: Sun, May 16 2010 08:30:50
Wow JC nice critiques! I wouldn't have typed out something like that for one combo even for the world cup videos. I like our combo wind. Sad that shadow didn't submit though...
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Date: Sun, May 16 2010 20:15:36
i havent had a pen for awhile and i wasn't allowed to use old clips anymore. i have a crappy pen for now, ill be submitting next round. sorry wind
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Date: Sun, May 16 2010 20:30:03QUOTE (Shadowserpant @ May 16 2010, 01:15 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>i havent had a pen for awhile and i wasn't allowed to use old clips anymore. i have a crappy pen for now, ill be submitting next round. sorry wind
O.o what happened to your pen?