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General Discussion / Fingerless Issue #3 RELEASE!
Penspinning Magazine
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Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 22:33:13
DIRECT LINK
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ZIP-FOLDER WITH TEXTFILES (Coming later)
Not quite as many articles as planned in this issue. Leave comments, requests and ideas here! I want to improve with more varying articles, an insert with every issue, new pens etc actually being released in the mag instead of on the forums directly, and more things. Good ideas, bad ideas? -
Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 22:38:58
is that picture of Cheukii on the cover?
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Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 22:47:04
No it's not >_< I just noticed the Cheukii text is too close to the picture. The picture is just a connection to the WC, so no it's not Cheukii, and no I don't know who it is either I just know that CrAsH allowed me to have it on the cover.
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Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 22:52:58
nice!!!
my article is really hard to read tho, maybe it should have been divided into more paragraphs :/
lol so many spelling mistakes
"Bonkura the Ledgend"
"will be published SEPERATLY"
and [email protected]? wtf, this email doesnt exist -
Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 22:57:16
'Gathering over the day,
some of them having travelled more
than 600km having travelled more
than 600km.'
lol
The magazine needs a proof-reader.
I've read a few articles and they have all been really excellent so far! The news was very interesting and the layout looks pretty good. Great job!!! -
Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 23:12:37
Rerelease! lol
Corrected the misstakes mentioned this far. Is the font too small? Your article was easier to read in word, where I think the text might have appeared bigger. The gaps between the paragraphs might also have been clearer.
Actually Sfsr [at] upsb [dot] info exists, xshadowfire made me the address upon request.
Zombo, can you upload it to the UPSB server? I want a directlink... -
Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 23:21:11
oh ok, i thought arcturus was supposed to be proof-reading tho?
cuz there's many more mistakes... maybe firebird will do it.
btw, why not ask readers to send emails to the magazine, and we can answer them in the next issue?
like "Readers' mail" section or something.
http://www.upsb.info/Fingerless 3.pdf -
Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 23:24:39
Yeah he was supposed to I think, I probably should've sent it to him tonight and released it tomorrow instead >_<
Readers mail sounds great ^^ -
Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 23:32:04
It looks really nice.
It seems short though... D: -
Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 23:45:41
Wow, that's really nice.
It reminded me I need to get pens for an MX^2.
The article on Bonkura was nice, too. I had always wanted to know more about him.
Great job, everyone. -
Date: Mon, Feb 4 2008 23:48:56QUOTE (Ryuukohaden @ Feb 4 2008, 06:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>Wow, that's really nice.
It reminded me I need to get pens for an MX^2.
The article on Bonkura was nice, too. I had always wanted to know more about him.
Great job, everyone.
Glad you liked it, Ryuuk. -
Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 00:11:02
It was great but yea it was a little short. I think it was better than #2 though.
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Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 04:18:52
The readability is fine (good choice of font and size). Not sure how others feel, but I think the inset quotes look nice enough to use one per article. If the quote is poignant, it can draw the reader's attention to an article he/she may have otherwise skipped. I agree it could be somewhat longer, but good job so far.
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Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 04:23:05
whoa when i went to megaupload to dl it, the letters i had to type in for the link were mx o.0
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Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 06:32:58
ps728 is going to retire? that's a shame
Also, why is Cheukii on the front page when Joshy was interviewed?
Great job, I can't wait till edition three. -
Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 08:17:41
I am ledgend.
but overall great release -
Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 09:12:17QUOTE (dust_kid @ Feb 5 2008, 07:32 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>Also, why is Cheukii on the front page when Joshy was interviewed?
Great job, I can't wait till edition three.
Cheukii was the one who got interviewed by CrAsH. Joshy was the one who was supposed to be Featured in this issue, which means he was gonna write an article about himself. I never got it though, but I'm still hoping I'll receive it soon, and release it separately (spelled CORRECTLY this time :D)
Also, 'till edition *four actually. This was so called #3.
I'm glad that people liked it anyways, and this is all still really new so of course it'll improve over time :) Also, if you want it to improve you can help and write an article for the next issue. That way it won't be as short ^^
edit: thanks for putting it in the wiki sketching ^^ -
Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 20:40:11
Ok, so is Cheukii the guy on the world cup page? Because it is the same picture.
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Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 21:14:39
You could read the posts in the thread.
QUOTE (Fallen Glory @ Feb 4 2008, 11:38 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>is that picture of Cheukii on the cover?QUOTE (Sfsr @ Feb 4 2008, 11:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>No it's not >_< I just noticed the Cheukii text is too close to the picture. The picture is just a connection to the WC, so no it's not Cheukii, and no I don't know who it is either I just know that CrAsH allowed me to have it on the cover. -
Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 22:25:56
nice stuff..sfsr...great project..
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Date: Tue, Feb 5 2008 22:39:56
I realy liked it, just one thing to Xero:
I think because of its cost the MX^2 isn't perfect- sure it may be the best pen out there atm but its not perfect ^^
Maybe in the next article when you evaluate pens you can add a little chart with the plus and cons of the pen. -
Date: Wed, Feb 6 2008 00:40:28
LOL thats josh ryu aka blackhero. just a note he moved to a boarding house in the us. im not sure if he still spins i havent been in touch
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Date: Wed, Feb 6 2008 03:52:00
I enjoyed reading that mag, even though I'm new to penspinning I was interested in reading about Bonkura. Really sounds like he was a legend.
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Date: Wed, Feb 6 2008 03:56:23
WTF at the korean age/UK age comment by cheukii
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Date: Wed, Feb 6 2008 07:18:17QUOTE (quebes @ Feb 6 2008, 01:40 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>LOL thats josh ryu aka blackhero. just a note he moved to a boarding house in the us. im not sure if he still spins i havent been in touch
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Date: Wed, Feb 6 2008 14:46:18QUOTE (Crzyazn @ Feb 5 2008, 10:56 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>WTF at the korean age/UK age comment by cheukii
Certain Asians count being in the womb as being 1 year, so you basically take your age and add 1 and you get your Korean (or Chinese/Japanese/Vietnamese/etc) age.
I thought the magazine was a good effort. The consistent use of 3 columns was kind of annoying, especially when used for long paragraphs such as Zombo's and Mats' entries. Also, the title for Cheukii's interview was on the lower left in the previous page, so that was easily missed. I thought the title was missing altogether!
Also, for the pictures from the gatherings, I would try and stack them and add captions. The other news bits could have been a smaller font and italicized to make room for the pictures and captions.
Next time, a good rule of thumb is to have just enough whitespace. Clutter is bad.
The articles were pretty good. Some of them were written in an informal tone, which I don't know is intended or not. My favourite article was the Bonkura one. You surprised me, Xero. -
Date: Wed, Feb 6 2008 14:59:11
wow, im really impressed, the presentation is really professionnal, the content is great, good articles.
good job and congratulation to the team -
Date: Wed, Feb 6 2008 15:36:30
This was really impressive and nicely done. The layout and the Penspinning news at the beginning gave it a professional look. Good job, looking forward to read the next issue!
I like the picture from the SweSpin gathering compared to the Stuttgart gathering pic
And the Bonkura article was touching... -
Date: Sat, Feb 9 2008 01:31:05
I printed this one out and read in. Honestly? I rather liked #2 better.
but this one was still very good.
I would like to do an article for the next one. Maby 2?
go here to help out http://www.upsb.info/forum/index.php?showtopic=3859&st=0 -
Date: Sat, Feb 9 2008 01:47:51QUOTE (Thewave @ Feb 5 2008, 05:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>I realy liked it, just one thing to Xero:
I think because of its cost the MX^2 isn't perfect- sure it may be the best pen out there atm but its not perfect ^^
Maybe in the next article when you evaluate pens you can add a little chart with the plus and cons of the pen.
That would be a good idea!
Thanks for the tip. -
Date: Sun, Feb 10 2008 13:31:57
good work sfsr, that was an enjoyable read. i liked xero's pieces, nicely written.
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Date: Tue, Feb 19 2008 22:05:43
i really like the the bonkura article. but xero, in the mx^2 article, try not to be too personal (dont know if thats how to put it). like instead of saying, "the tricks I can do easily with the mx^2 are..." maybe say, "the tricks easily done with an mx^2 are..."
lol i hope i explained that right. -
Date: Tue, Feb 19 2008 22:55:41QUOTE (Dynamik @ Feb 19 2008, 06:05 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>i really like the the bonkura article. but xero, in the mx^2 article, try not to be too personal (dont know if thats how to put it). like instead of saying, "the tricks I can do easily with the mx^2 are..." maybe say, "the tricks easily done with an mx^2 are..."
lol i hope i explained that right.
I know what you mean. Instead of coming from a personal perspective, make it into a 3rd person view. -
Date: Fri, Feb 22 2008 11:27:16
I can't download. can someone give the interview with cheukii??
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Date: Fri, Feb 22 2008 12:55:12QUOTE (Steen-J @ Feb 22 2008, 06:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>I can't download. can someone give the interview with cheukii??
this should work: http://www.upsb.info/Fingerless%203.pdf