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  1. ryzaku
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:03:30

    This is my 5 month presentation. the spinnning is phail >.>. Here it is:


    song used: the future-epik high

    pens used: r-stic twist
    rsvp ry-x
    jp pencil mod

    thanks for watching i guess >.>

    EDIT: The f**king TF charge rev was a mess up >.>

  2. ArchAngel8
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:07:45

    Not bad fer 5 months happy.gif

  3. ryzaku
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:08:22

    lol thanks

  4. sangara
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:19:16

    Hrm we may be penspinners but I thought we could count dunno.gif

  5. stevieboy7
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:20:56

    not too bad...
    you definately need to work on smoothness...
    a prime example of how you are moving you hand and everything too much is after the first clip, your hand is still moving like crazy!! tongue.gif
    please stop doing that multiple thumbflap charge thing... until you get your smoothness down pat.
    Try learning new things! If my eyes didn't decieve me, i saw mostly charge, sonic variations, and FL TA.
    Try to do more baks! more shadows!. and when you get the other tricks smooth you can really start doing some awesome combinations, and have a heavier and more interesting arsenal of tricks to Freestyle with.
    Overall, not too bad.

  6. ryzaku
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:21:27

    QUOTE (sangara @ Jul 29 2008, 09:19 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    Hrm we may be penspinners but I thought we could count dunno.gif

    whut do you mean?

  7. sangara
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:22:36

    Umm does 2nd Clip.... 3rd Clip ring a bell?

  8. ryzaku
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:24:47

    QUOTE (stevieboy7 @ Jul 29 2008, 09:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    not too bad...
    you definately need to work on smoothness...
    a prime example of how you are moving you hand and everything too much is after the first clip, your hand is still moving like crazy!! tongue.gif
    please stop doing that multiple thumbflap charge thing... until you get your smoothness down pat.
    Try learning new things! If my eyes didn't decieve me, i saw mostly charge, sonic variations, and FL TA.
    Try to do more baks! more shadows!. and when you get the other tricks smooth you can really start doing some awesome combinations, and have a heavier and more interesting arsenal of tricks to Freestyle with.
    Overall, not too bad.

    thx for teh constructive criticism. the tf charge\movement of the hand is becuz i suck when using a camera >.< and also i have very little space to spin in at the angle i use. thanks tho. i do shadows, and devils sonic\arounds.

    QUOTE (sangara @ Jul 29 2008, 09:22 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    Umm does 2nd Clip.... 3rd Clip ring a bell?

    WMM sucks nuts duede >.<

  9. sangara
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:28:37

    QUOTE (ryzaku @ Jul 29 2008, 06:24 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    WMM sucks nuts duede >.<



    Err what does WMM have anything to do with you naming your clips.

  10. ryzaku
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:29:23

    QUOTE (sangara @ Jul 29 2008, 09:28 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    Err what does WMM have anything to do with you naming your clips.

    i put the things in right, but the titles jacked up like an a**hole >.>

  11. Aiyah
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:42:41

    try slowing down a bit so it'll look smoother thumb.gif

  12. ryzaku
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 01:57:47

    QUOTE (Aiyah @ Jul 29 2008, 08:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    try slowing down a bit so it'll look smoother thumb.gif

    my spinnning is fast. i cant break the habit >.<

  13. shonenbatman
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 04:15:30

    why cant you set the cam down?

  14. ryzaku
    Date: Wed, Jul 30 2008 05:20:19

    QUOTE (shonenbatman @ Jul 30 2008, 12:15 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    why cant you set the cam down?

    becuz i dont have teh angl for that

  15. June
    Date: Thu, Jul 31 2008 04:56:58

    QUOTE (stevieboy7 @ Jul 29 2008, 06:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
    not too bad...
    you definately need to work on smoothness...
    a prime example of how you are moving you hand and everything too much is after the first clip, your hand is still moving like crazy!! tongue.gif
    please stop doing that multiple thumbflap charge thing... until you get your smoothness down pat.
    Overall, not too bad.


    +1
    the multiple thumbflap charge thing bothered me too...especially when you do it like 3 times in a row
    and try to get smoother and also a better angle?
    but good for 5 months biggrin.gif

  16. Silentspin
    Date: Thu, Jul 31 2008 06:36:33

    very good lol

  17. ryzaku
    Date: Fri, Aug 1 2008 00:05:22

    like i said. My TF charge rev doesnt normally look like that. i messed up and i didnt bother to make another clip.

  18. Nam Dang
    Date: Fri, Aug 1 2008 06:07:01

    not bad..... tongue.gif tongue.gif
    Nice vid......................... wink.gif wink.gif
    can we have a friendly battle for fun laugh.gif